Trickle

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mrswoo, Dec 13, 2006.

  1. mrswoo

    mrswoo Member

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    Incandescent moonlit whisps
    trickled down your face like warm wax
    on candlesticks. Now, I stare blankly
    into the luminescent glow,
    exhausted from futile efforts to recall
    the warmth. So cold now...frigid.
    How you danced
    with the grace of an elegant crush
    buried deep within snow on
    that chilled winter's evening,
    twirling my well laid plans
    into thin air with each step.
    You were not dancing with me.
    Warm wax trickles down the
    candlesticks like fresh blood
    from a wound. I stare frigidly
    into the flickering flames,
    shivering from the memory
    of the flash of red hot rage.
    My breath sends damp
    white ghosts into the cold air
    with each exhale.
    You were still lying to me.
    Now you lie, buried deep within
    snow on this Christmas Eve,
    as I guide myself straight
    through the wandrings of
    your indiscreet passion
    in vivid, mind crushing detail.
    And the fresh blood trickles down
    my fingertips like incandescent
    whisps of moonlight on your face.

     
  2. Justagrrl420

    Justagrrl420 Member

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    ooooooh wow love the imagery..very nice.
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    sizzlingly marvelous

    "twirling my well laid plans
    into thin air with each step."

    brilliant:beatnik2:
     
  4. mrswoo

    mrswoo Member

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    Thank you. :)
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    A trickling flow,
    from silvery-white to crimson red,
    surging like surreal seduction;
    whispered with soft intensity.
     

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