Tree of Light

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Dec 29, 2007.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    moving through this path of smoke
    over the mounds of fungi
    around the heiron valley
    south of the caicon Mountains
    just shy of Lake ShomaDa
    lies a plain of green
    luscious fields of gold and purple
    with a crisp aroma coming from the center
    there lies a tree, the greatest tree of all
    the tree of light
    as high as the stars
    an inscription sits at the base saying
    welcome my children, enter without care
    and you shall know the greatest
    feeling one can bare.
     
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    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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  3. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    i liked the drug references, if nothing else. clever.

    edit;

    as it is, this work was written years ago and revived just days ago. my question is, you don't have anything new to post considering the gap?
     
  4. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    sadly no. I can't write anymore
     
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