Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, May 29, 2004.

  1. hi this is for all who echo time....

    tepid waves,so cool on skin.
    waters race,rush forward more.
    my body whispers for golden rays,
    within the clarity of beautiful
    Death is for the living , the life.
    stony memories ,melting see through
    sense the taste,salty feelings.
    only paths iv'e lost myself in..
    turned to know ,face those shores.
    visual movements remind me again.
    the focus touched,delved within,
    iv'e gone with tides,rolled back.
    allowed to be open,entered
    unfolled most ,i come across.
    echoed many sounds , then
    iv'e laughed.
    to be true,freed from the chain.
    given all ,to much..
    now im willing ,carefree eye.
    follow not those tepid waves,
    go for rapids, enjoy the echos
    from before..
    take care to remember .....

    thank you
    love n peace from saff
    this is something that i felt
    about love..
  2. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

    Thank you saff, as usual you have elegance and insight. You really are at one with all things natural, and I envy you mildly.
  3. I like the path your mind leaves for others to follow your thoughts.
  4. i hope this sparked a little something in your

    love n peace from saff
    be whole..

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