for all and more..if need be... bleakness,the view. a child that cries,yet can not be saved... look away we do,not to be shamed... upon the beauty these golden rays that dance and change a world of rage... oceans will fill again.. weep not upon this, sphere we walk. for cries of happiness also come... lavish love,the human feel...silver beams may also reveal... to remember you, to remember ... bleakness,this view... once unerved me.... no longer .. thank you lovenpeace from saff
so much poetry on this board is wistful... maybe it's just my mood, but this poem hit me hard with nostalgia. I usually object to overuse of any piece of punctuation, but the "..." are just right in this poem. You did a good job at the right time.
thank you for reply.i feel my words may hurt at times... just reading through my words again. i always write from the moment. so what is written is done.... lovenpeace from saff
