To Nina

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chiefburningtoke, Sep 27, 2009.

  1. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    Men’s hands
    Seek woman’s necks,
    Like bony moths
    Banging their soft heads
    Against a flask of light.

    The innate bully
    Called survival,
    Falls through hoops dignity
    Until landing on the perfect victim.
    We can only love the happy
    And retarded;
    Or babies
    Who have no designs
    Against us.

    I remember everything-
    Evil lends me the photographs.
    My hands are udders of blood;
    All my excuses have fled
    To better egos.
    The fibrous moon of your face
    Pulls the unforgiving blanket
    Of green drowning over me.

    I cant apologize seriously
    As daily I pray to God
    Hell is full…
     
  2. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I enjoyed reading this. Very original visuals... bony moths banging their heads... hands are udders of blood...
     
  3. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    Thank you vetty,vetty much!
     

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