To love and let go

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Moonjava, Feb 16, 2006.

  1. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Days go by
    They turn to months
    And even pass as years
    And I think of all the changes
    That slowly brought us here

    Blessings and Curses
    Losses and gains
    Life-changing seasons
    Fall down like rain

    And in the reflection of the puddles
    I still see your face
    The days flash by
    Of when we chose to be in love

    Dancing from sunset to sunset,
    I see you smile warmly
    As you blow me a kiss good-bye
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    A winding vision of love, parting to arrive again.
     
  3. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    this is alot like what i have been going through here lately, thank u for this
     
  4. Aurora of Oceania

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    Thanks for making the evening more wonderful.
     
  5. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    Wonderful imagery. Very nice poem.
     
  6. DoyalConQueso

    DoyalConQueso Member

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    It's open and airy, like a bird's eye view of your life, like watching from the clouds raining down. Do you think love is a choice? Now you've got me thinking.
     
  7. Mr_squirrel

    Mr_squirrel Member

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    thats an interesting quistion... im not sure about it myself to be honest. iv argued the point that its not before though, i mean there is reason behind love but i cant tell you why i love someone, it seems like with all the things you can say about someone you love its the thing you cant put your finger on thats the most important. so id have to say that its not a conciuse choice atleast.
     
  8. fabioula

    fabioula Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    having loved and lost .wanting it back,you just said it all and so truthfully
     
  9. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    in a nutshell, love is blind. even if you yourself can't see why you love another person... it doesn't change the fact that the feelings linger on.
    you can't choose to love or not to love... you can only choose how you act on those feelings.
     
  10. SpliffVortex II

    SpliffVortex II Banned

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    more like night time or better yet the grave yard shift.
     

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