To be Alone

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Mar 2, 2006.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

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    When the bleak sky pours remorse
    And the mountains fall into deserts
    And moist malice jungles scream revolt
    Show yourself again
    Come out you cowering clown
    I know you’re in there

    When the last ray of sunlight
    Shines upon your hair
    Come out baby
    I know you’re scared

    When the silver stars drop
    From velvet sunken space
    And all is lost
    I want to see your face
    Once more

    For the end is not absolute
    Where one ends
    Another begins
    A village emerges from the ocean
    New Atlantis

    Doors slam
    And windows open
    And only one of all the rest
    To save us from the divine mockery
    Of heartfelt meaning

    When words lose weight
    And fall out of shape
    I can no longer reach you

    Why do comets wish to orbit you?
    Why does the sun shine solely for you?
    I know you were the one
    The one I should have had
    And now you are gone
    And I am very sad

    I stood idle far too long
    Waiting is slow torture
    Is it too late for my chance?
    Are you saying that we shall never dance?
    You don’t know
    How great it would have been

    Together we would have made galaxies collide
    Simply magic
    With you by my side
    My cosmic mate
    Has moved on
    And sealed my fate

    And so darling
    Now the light is revealed
    I hear the distance calling
    Leave me to my solace
    I guess I am meant
    To be alone
     
  2. foundme

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    I like your poem...I like the abstract sense...showing love and loss without saying it
     
  3. TheLizardKingMike

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    Thank you, I appreciate it.
     
  4. osiris

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    Love of one to another is all of sorrow, and satiety, lest into that reciprocal wave be brought Love for the Absolute. This is a lesson of which some, having already known this, are continually reminded, by those who have yet to learn it. My best wishes and blessings to you in your personal foray into these matters. :)
     
  5. TheLizardKingMike

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    Thanks man, it sounds like you can relate. No matter what I do, it seems that I just can't stop writing about the one that got away, the one that would have been the best.
     
  6. mrsmorrison27

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    this is beautiful, i truly understand its message
     
  7. TheLizardKingMike

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    Thank you, I'm glad someone understands. That's why I write, to reach people.
     
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