tired children eyes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Oct 12, 2004.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    tired children eyes
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    in a scene we are green symbolic
    deciduous mushrooms fume exceptance
    rainbow sun falls into the ground
    we'll be around again and again
    in fungus houses the children play
    and the mothers seek to touch
    the kitten wimpers in her sleep
    where do dreams go when we awake?
    in high the sky, a discolouration
    a darker blue with a star inside
    the father watches as it falls
    & is drowned in his life alone, alone
    (alone)
    with a fire stomach he is lonely
    the mushroom family is out for fun
    he cries through his eyes out loud inside
    because some things can't be undone
    mothers love your children dear
    for mushrooms don't stay here forever
    one day they stray out into the world
    & you're left with yourself & your other
    your father can't stay strong inside
    when the motion made is split to two
    he cries through his eyes out loud inside
    til one day alone he finally dies
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Rich and deep with heartfelt symbols. Precious life, sacred trust and unglamorous aloneness warmed slightly by enduring compassion for others; waiting for the fire in the belly to be embraced by the wild zephyrs of heart and amorous hugs.
     
  3. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    so life starts again
    and children will be here ..
    for all the world to play again..

    love n peace from saff
    nice piece...
     
  4. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    yeah
    what they said :&

    i love it....
     
  5. Bloody_Kisses

    Bloody_Kisses Thizzler

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    i think this is one of my favorites from you, inbloom. really, it was great.
     
  6. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    awww, thank you all, very much. :)
     
  7. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    we are green symbolic'-beautiful line....

    lots of mushrooms and specialness yayness!
     
  8. ladygodivasoperation

    ladygodivasoperation Member

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    I don't like it much.
    keep writing!
     
  9. madbeast

    madbeast Member

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    exactly :)
     
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