Through A Window (A poem I wrote)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gratefulvegan, Mar 10, 2007.

  1. gratefulvegan

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    Through A Window



    Through the slender pane of glass

    We watched the robins form their nests

    Of scattered twigs and fallen leaves

    Within the fruitless apple trees



    We watched the ivy intertwine

    An emerald quilt upon the soil

    It climbed atop the wooden fence

    And hung above the concrete slabs



    We watched a group of flowers grow

    Between the bricks, beside the creek

    Attracting lonesome butterflies

    To float between their brittle stems



    Yet now she rests below such sights

    My dearest wife, deprived of life

    Her bones amongst the unseen roots

    Her name engraved upon her tomb



    And curtains hang before the frame

    To shroud the ever-changing scene

    Preserve the faintest memories

    Of flowers, ivy, apple trees.


    - Jim R.
     
  2. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    thay was a really awesome poem.good work
     
  3. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    one of the most sincere poems on this forum

    sensitive in a rare way
     
  4. gratefulvegan

    gratefulvegan Member

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    Thanks guys.
     
  5. imherbert

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    absolutely beautiful. good job.
     
  6. gratefulvegan

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    thanks a lot herb.
     

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