Three Short Pieces

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BlackBillBlake, Aug 24, 2004.

  1. BlackBillBlake

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    I.

    This is a bridge
    From here
    To here,
    From where you are
    To where you are.
    I am
    The connector man;
    You are
    Being connected
    While you hear
    Quietly
    Unobtrusively
    Subliminally
    Connected.
    The unknown becomes the known
    And
    A new unknown arises.
    The seen shades off
    Deftly into the un-seen,
    Past and future
    Into present.
    Beneath the bridge
    Flows a clear stream
    Down to a dense sea
    Of transition.
    Words hide in the depths;
    Sometimes they fall
    Into the net,
    Onto waiting grid.
    Visible glint of
    Blue green scale,
    Visible image drawing up
    Invisible thread,
    A spoken word
    And an unspoken feeling,
    A reaching out to
    Identity by touch
    Discerns the direction
    Of the path,
    Becomes the shape of
    An enormous question.
    A waiting emptiness,
    A silent anticipation



    II.

    I am hardly aware. A series, a kind of resonance through their respective ranges rising and falling sounds experienced via the description moving into the position of the head and surging through the ranges of the percipient body itself and in turn I who am hardly aware of the domain or the crowd of possibilities all see represent one end of that I the universe then consists of my surroundings domains of perception and ranges of emanatory transformation impossible perceptual configurations around my head above and within these domains the very matrix there is nothing solid in the lower regions but unconscious matter seeking to emerge at the zenith it becomes clear perfectly manifest.

    III.

    The Voice.



    I.

    I am the quiet green glow in densely packed
    Regions of steel and cement
    I am the inner matrix, gathering the pieces together,
    Collecting the scattered fragments
    I am the voice that says it is still possible
    I am the all-encompassing radiance of bliss
    I am nursemaid to baby galaxies
    I am glaciation
    I am the body’s energy
    I am movie, projector cinema and audience
    I am clairaudience amidst the alarm of thunder
    I am keeper of the diamond key.



    II.

    It was ground moving
    Multi-dimensional reality
    Splintered illumination
    Of consciousness
    Pierced the mind
    Dew covering the
    Sky of consciousness
    In its diamonds

    The light is coming
    Through the air
    Turning everywhere
    Touching the heart
    Covering the sky of wands

    To know inside
    This universe
    Swept away the last turning


    To feel it through me
    Warm rising tide

    All that I know
    Crystallized
    From all that I know
    Swept away
    Eternity
    You come
    To visit me.




     
  2. Cosmic Butterfly

    Cosmic Butterfly Member

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    dReAM InsiDe YoUr DreAm...A WarM seNsatIon PulseS ThrouGh...YoU loOK oNce, UnSuRe oF thE aPPaRition FlowIng bY, SmilInG At YoursElf As You ForGet... Or is It RemeMber?
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    "A spoken word,
    unspoken feeling,
    reaching out to identity by touch;
    waiting emptiness in silent anticipation.

    There is nothing solid,
    in the lower regions,
    but unconscious seeking
    to emerge at the zenith.

    I am the quiet green glow
    in densely packed regions
    of steel and cement.

    The light is coming,
    turning everywhere,
    touching the heart;
    covering the sky of wands.

    Warm rising tide, crystallized;
    Dew covering consciousness
    in diamonds."

    These are the images I enjoyed the most.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Thumbs up on this, especially enoyed the first part; the images, smooth, flowing, delicate and meloncholic. Just perfect for me.
     
  5. BlackBillBlake

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    Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed!
     
  6. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. roygbivp

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    2 things....
    keep on writing....because that is great poetry
    keep on truckin.....because thats the way to go....
     
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