This poem sux and it hates you... yes you!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Duck, Jun 13, 2006.

  1. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    nothing like any of your other ones
    I agree, it 'sux'
     
  2. steel_bubbles

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    I personally like this a lot. It's really a different perspecitive of the world, I never really thought of the world like that except when I think of adults.. ettiquette world... hm..
     
  3. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    I think you should have added in picking the nose of a small animal and flicking the booger at an old woman

    Yeah man, it didnt hate me at all... Definitley add in more
     
  4. steel_bubbles

    steel_bubbles Member

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    no, i still like it. i dont really care if it's shitty, life is shitty in general, so naturally everything is shitty. I still like the poem.
     
  5. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    people do way too much ass kissing on this forum *cough*steel bubbles*cough*
     
  6. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    i dont get waht told you that.. the poem?? wha??

    Add that line in
     
  7. Duck

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  8. twist1up4me

    twist1up4me Member

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    having a shitty day man?
    thanx for the words, i've enjoyed the hate & suckiness of them....

    peace & love,
    twist
     

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