I personally like this a lot. It's really a different perspecitive of the world, I never really thought of the world like that except when I think of adults.. ettiquette world... hm..
I think you should have added in picking the nose of a small animal and flicking the booger at an old woman Yeah man, it didnt hate me at all... Definitley add in more
no, i still like it. i dont really care if it's shitty, life is shitty in general, so naturally everything is shitty. I still like the poem.
having a shitty day man? thanx for the words, i've enjoyed the hate & suckiness of them.... peace & love, twist