here are a few of my most recent poems...i wrote them in class instead of taking notes...pretty random...hope you like... (untitled) balanced on a single point in time the point between my climax and your decline I'd rather disappoint than amuse amused as I was by you and you say we can only be friends but I never expected much else just your body close to mine and your hand between my thighs I offered you all the treasures I had a sizable pirates bounty but you fell for fools gold thank God cuz I couldnt afford you and now that I've had you I wont let you forget me and my persistent insecurity... ------- (untitled again) the river runs red in wake of my demise the bones will not stay burried and the midnight sun shines through my fragmented state of mind... ------- (also untitled) ...and yours was a sapphire rage always followed by a turquoise calm I had a ring of each one for my right hand one for my left then you left and my hallucinated happiness followed you out I knew you werent perfect because perfection is a fluid thing and drowning was your biggest fear paradise is a mirage a concept exposed exposed as i have been I'm surprised that I'm not cold because its snowing now flakes of crystalized depression and the blanket of sorrow it forms wraps my thoughts around you... -------
how beautiful each of your poems are wonderful, but the last of them drew me in...it was exceptional.
Wow! Sorry, that's not a very substantial answer...can I come back to you when I've had time to digest every little piece your massive talent? X
thank you all! Firebelle...so good to hear from you...and yes...do get back to me! have you got anything new?
