Here is a poem I wrote for english in grade 9 haha.. The teacher was a little terrified. which also led to a parent-teacher confrence The True Story of Jack and Jill By Damaya (Grade 9) (wrote for english class) Jack and Jill blew up the hill Jack and Jill had a great thrill As Jack tumbled over and over He fell down and broke his shoulder Jill ran down to Jack Gave him a great big SMACK Jack began to slaughter That poor worthless daughter Jill sprang up and grabbed that pail of water Smacked and hit him black and blue He looked as if he hadn’t a clue Jack tried to declare peace Jill would only laugh and tease Cinderella came walking by She thought she would at least try She took that gruesome Jill Shoved her upon a hot grill She added some sauce And without much loss Ate her up Until she fit in a cup!
how about this... ? Jack and Jill went up the hill To smoke a little leaf Jack got high and opened his fly and Jill said where's the beef? I didn't write that. Your poem doesn't flow very well, but I do like it. It's amusing. Keep it up. Writing is the best outlet. I've written poems about things I didn't even realize I was dwelling upon. It's scary really... what we think about without realizing. Anyway, thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading your poem. hugs Em.
well it was a poem I wrote in grade 9.. haha.. I have gotten much better since that one. glad you liked it.
