The snow I love has dreams

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ripple23, Jan 1, 2005.

  1. ripple23

    ripple23 Member


    Anything that is spring in this world
    Is collected
    in your hands of well water,
    night-lined,
    Practicing an absolute reflection

    I have a reason to trust
    The quickness of your fingers
    At times they resemble narrow rivers,
    distant, undressed.

    Do not tell me your chances
    For a revolution of stars
     
  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

    whoa, i liked this one....

    short and sweet, but really good.
     
  3. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

    ...undressed rivers... *licks*

    this was magic....
     
  4. standingdeer

    standingdeer Member

    well done, I enjoyed this very much. It reminds me...
     

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