The man at the bus stop

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Digger168, Aug 16, 2005.

  1. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

    Ignoble, the pre death hack of the potbellied man
    hangs in the air like a perverse exclamation.

    His almost unrealistic body hangs from his frame
    like loose shards of flesh from an elephant, the
    death rattle startles me because when I look into
    his eyes, I can see he knows his death is comming

    I can also see he does not care.

    I see myself.
  2. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

    Nice mirroring effect. The first stanza is alot of fun.

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