The Light is Green

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Makimono402, Dec 25, 2006.

  1. Makimono402

    Makimono402 Member

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    3 a.m walks on the track, we spoke of social theory.
    Eagle key chain in tow, model of a perfect student.
    She said, she said, "I resign no worries about this kid."
    In attempts to match it, I`d replicate, reciprocate everything you did.
    Sauntering in the hall, you stood confident, tall.
    Strolling off to college that very fall.

    Not often enough do you come visiting.
    I`ve lost you to reality, to life.
    Words of Asia now spill from your lips.
    The scent of you still lingers on the shirts that you`ve hugged when you did come back.
    That smell, so urban, so sophisticate.
    It`s you that we, the team, lack.

    I`m like Mama Cleo baby.
    I`ve seen your future.
    Your words floating in and through important ears.
    Gavel in hand, equity justice is brought to right.
    Sexual orientation finally coming to light.
    I just hope you don`t forget your play sister here.
    Hero doesn`t do you justice.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Love it! That second stanza has a lot of good stuff. Great visuals as well.
     
  3. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    Reminds me of Dylan. It's along the lines of Ballad of a Thin Man. Are you a Dylan fan?
     
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