the last summer of love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by uilliamwanderlust, Jan 21, 2012.

  1. uilliamwanderlust

    uilliamwanderlust Guest

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    I lay naked the smooth stone is worm from the sun its in my eyes I see a dark room were in our hands connected I look deep into your eyes so green I can feel them looking into mine and when you say it all the games we played were for nothing the way you say I love you the way it penetrates deeper than any other meaning so I put my hand up to block the sun from your eyes and mine to kiss you to tell you I love these days gone past are they or will they live on in my mind awake at dawn it’s a small bed I know its the beginning of the end I don’t know why I liked it not that it was all that comfortable but it you legs entwined with mine your head on my chest one soul two minds destine for greatness or one kind or another
     
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    I love this run-on sentenceyou make it flow
     
  3. TomDijon

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    *applauds*

    very good :)
     
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