the journey into darkness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by shobs, Aug 7, 2007.

  1. shobs

    shobs Member

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    withering grass feeling the pressure of time

    devouring across each blade

    we are born to grow and grown to die

    we stroll casually among the stars

    careful not to scare the moon into hiding

    for she will come full again

    into the night

    wandering, wandering

    in search of the never ending light

    as it fades

    and fades

     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    For a 15 year old this was very profound and really well written! I'd love to see more from you.
     
  3. blackheartbitch

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    this is really good...wow im jealous of your abilities.
     
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