The Instrument

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by maryjaneguitargurl, Jun 13, 2004.

  1. maryjaneguitargurl

    maryjaneguitargurl I am just like you.

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    The Instrument

    My fingers callused
    I strum freely
    No one judging me
    Just me and my friend

    We take one step
    A change in sound
    The energy it gives me
    Makes me want to live

    Its always there
    My knowledge makes this beauty
    I feel loved
    I go to a land unknown from this

    My fingers bleed
    I fall deeply in love
    No war is being fought
    Just me and my friend



     
  2. QuinntheMightyEskimo

    QuinntheMightyEskimo Member

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    hey, i just wrote a song like that, not exactly the same, but same idea, but yours was much better, nice job
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Groovy Baby!! I liked that poem and envy you for being able to play guitar.

    Peace,
    Moonjava
     
  4. maryjaneguitargurl

    maryjaneguitargurl I am just like you.

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    gracias


    peace
    chickens
     
  5. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    Nice poem. I wrote a lot of poems when I was your age too...this is a happy poem. A content poem. Most of mine were not so content.
     
  6. maryjaneguitargurl

    maryjaneguitargurl I am just like you.

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    i have some other ones too that arent happy but ya i will post em let me find em

    peace
    chickens
     

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