The Human Flaw (Random thoughts as I sit sick and bored in my room)

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    The Human Flaw
    Nature is a cycle,
    Life ending in death to grant more life,
    We are all connected through the vast soul of mother earth,
    One united family,
    Death grants life and all that living beings use or destroy they return in the form of more life granted,
    All but humans,
    For we have a flaw,
    For each death we cause,
    Our soul connection to that being is severed and dies,
    Killing a portion of ourselves,
    For each death we consume,
    We absorb that death into ourselves,
    And what is normally returned to the earth to grant new life,
    Is retained within us due to human ignorance,
    Causing us to accumulate death in our souls,
    That manifests itself as cancers, disease, and other ailments,
    This is mother natures justice against those who do not contribute to her cycle,
    As we sever ourselves from our souls,
    And destroy our own destructive selves.
    Life is a cycle of contribution to new life with no room for greed,
    And those who do not contribute,
    Can only accumulate the death that should have become new life,
    And their souls are slowly lost,
    As their sea of greedy death grows deeper.

    Haha ok so this is a very random thought I had and for some reason could only express in this poem - esque form. So let me know what you think.
  2. AcousticPeace

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    thats an interesting way to look at it. Life is screwy and i dont think any person will ever know exactly what we are or who we came from but i love talking, writing, and reading about it! nice

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