The Human Flaw (Random thoughts as I sit sick and bored in my room)

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by j.pw, Feb 16, 2009.

  1. j.pw

    j.pw Guest

    The Human Flaw
    Nature is a cycle,
    Life ending in death to grant more life,
    We are all connected through the vast soul of mother earth,
    One united family,
    Death grants life and all that living beings use or destroy they return in the form of more life granted,
    All but humans,
    For we have a flaw,
    For each death we cause,
    Our soul connection to that being is severed and dies,
    Killing a portion of ourselves,
    For each death we consume,
    We absorb that death into ourselves,
    And what is normally returned to the earth to grant new life,
    Is retained within us due to human ignorance,
    Causing us to accumulate death in our souls,
    That manifests itself as cancers, disease, and other ailments,
    This is mother natures justice against those who do not contribute to her cycle,
    As we sever ourselves from our souls,
    And destroy our own destructive selves.
    Life is a cycle of contribution to new life with no room for greed,
    And those who do not contribute,
    Can only accumulate the death that should have become new life,
    And their souls are slowly lost,
    As their sea of greedy death grows deeper.

    Haha ok so this is a very random thought I had and for some reason could only express in this poem - esque form. So let me know what you think.
     
  2. Kinky Ramona

    Kinky Ramona Back by popular demand!

    I think you are in for it. :D
     
  3. Zoomie

    Zoomie My mom is dead, ok?

  4. silverhippy

    silverhippy Comfortably Numb

    Did any of you really read all that ?? Geeez.. Whatever happened to 100 words or less ???

    Peace
     
  5. Jaitaiyai

    Jaitaiyai Cianpo di tutti capi

    Is this writers week?
    Should we all be posting our poems n shit?
     
  6. mamaKCita

    mamaKCita fucking stupid.

    hahahah. complete insensitivity! always funny.

    i'd call id bad poetry, but i suck at poetry and therefore can't be considered an expert.
     
  7. Zoomie

    Zoomie My mom is dead, ok?

    I only wish I could post that flash instead of linking it.

    I'd totally use it. Several times a day.
     
  8. TheGanjaKing

    TheGanjaKing Newbie

    tell skip to let us embed videos
     
  9. Zoomie

    Zoomie My mom is dead, ok?

    Wait wait wait... you're MY bitch, not the reverse.

    YOU tell him.
     
  10. TheGanjaKing

    TheGanjaKing Newbie

    he's already been told but yada yada yada bandwidth, dial up users



    fuck the dial up users. its their loss

    i want embedded vids dammit
     
  11. AquaLight

    AquaLight Senior Member

    There should be a characters limit restriction per post, this is painful.
     
  12. Zoomie

    Zoomie My mom is dead, ok?

    Perhaps you should start your own site.
     
  13. TheGanjaKing

    TheGanjaKing Newbie

    no

    then I won't have anyone to show my embedded vids too, since no one will join
     
  14. Zoomie

    Zoomie My mom is dead, ok?

    I'll join. I'm already on like 8 boards. What's one more?
     
  15. TheGanjaKing

    TheGanjaKing Newbie

    but think of the effort that would cause me to exert


    how bout this

    you make one, I'll take the credit, and instead of me repaying you, I just sit here and do nothing.

    works for me
     
  16. Zoomie

    Zoomie My mom is dead, ok?

    That's actually what I was trying to do. So much for originality...
     
  17. TheGanjaKing

    TheGanjaKing Newbie

    well, i'm not short of brain capacity, just fat
     
  18. nesta

    nesta Banned

    there is and it is 100,000 characters:cheers2:

     
  19. nesta

    nesta Banned

    edit: delete
     

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