The Horse That Had a Flat Tire, by Richard Brautigan

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dirtydog, Dec 30, 2009.

  1. dirtydog

    dirtydog Banned

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    The Writers Forum poetry thread is for people to publish their own work. I'm taking the liberty of reprinting something of Brautigan's, because I like it and hopefully you will too.
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    Once upon a valley
    there came down
    from some goldenblue mountains
    a handsome young prince
    who was riding
    a dawncolored horse
    named Lordsburg.

    I love you
    You’re my breathing castle
    Gentle so gentle
    We’ll live forever

    In the valley
    there was a beautiful maiden
    whom the prince
    drifted into love with
    like a New Mexico made from
    apple thunder and long
    glass beds.

    I love you
    You’re my breathing castle
    Gentle so gentle
    We’ll live forever

    The prince enchanted
    the maiden
    and they rode off
    on the dawncolored horse
    named Lordsburg
    toward the goldenblue mountains.

    I love you
    You’re my breathing castle
    Gentle so gentle
    We’ll live forever

    They would have lived
    happily ever after
    if the horse hadn’t had
    a flat tire
    in front of a dragon’s
    house.

    ***

    From the collection, "The Pill versus the Springhill Mine Disaster", by Richard Brautigan
     
  2. isoisidorus

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    I like this poem too!
     
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