the girl in the window

so mysterious
how her eyes they behold
such pain, such passion
that is yet to be told
and her hair it trails behind
her as she walks with grace
and her tears they do light up
her beautiful face
i wonder what her name is
what she does do with her time
i wonder if she ever
wonders about mine
and today like many days
my eyes missed hers
and i think does this girl in the window
ever wonder?

 

the feeling this creates is very familiar to me..nice work

 

thanks

 

beautiful...you really made me want to know this person better!!
it was nice..keep on writing

 

it has a very mysterious feel...i liked it...