The Burglar

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Jul 23, 2005.

  1. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    Soft blue child,

    your buttery smile
    and mischievous eyes
    reveal your guilty secret...

    You have broken into my larder
    and reclaimed that which is rightfully yours.

    All that is left
    is your baby footprints
    in butter.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    This butter theif, with gilded lute,
    calls like laughter bubbling
    on a sea of froth.

    His eyes, like soft does,
    touch each milkmaids
    priceless inner beauty.

    With a simple glance
    one is completly undone,
    dissolving into cosmic spirals.

    Like ants, we scurry to play.
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Great poems, guys :D
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    B-ness, great job! Made me smile~*

    Sylvan, beautiful response.
     
  5. Bhaskar

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    Thanks for outdoing me sylvan *pout*

    [eric cartman voice] love you guys...
     
  6. sylvanlightning

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    Dear Brother How I've Remembered You,

    Jaya Radha Madhava
    :Bhaktivinode Thakur

    jaya radha madhava kunja-bihari
    gopi-jana-vallabha giri-vara-dhari
    yasodanandana vraja-jana-ranjana
    jamuna-tira-bana-cari

    We both have been outdone ;)

    Namaste,
    Sylvan
     
  7. Bhaskar

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    The most beautiful verse on Krishna, in my opinion, was written by the great advaitin scholar, Madhusoodana Saraswati (his commentary on the Bhagavad Geeta is considered equal to that of even Sri Adi Shankaracharya). He wrote:

    vamshivibhooshitakarat navaneerabharaat
    petaambarat aruna bimba phalada roshtaat
    poornendusundara mukhat aravinda netraat
    krishnaat param kimapi tattvam aham na jaane.

    - I know no greater truth than Krishna
    whose has the hue of a rain-laden clud,
    whose hand is adorned by a flute,
    whose face is as lovely as the full moon,
    and whose eyes are like lotus petals.
     
  8. sylvanlightning

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    Oh, how fair and priceless in its pandita simplicity. Thank you.
     
  9. sylvanlightning

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    vidya-vinaya-sampanne
    brahmane gavi hastini
    suni caiva svapake ca
    panditah sama-darsinah

    Bg 5.18
     
  10. Bhaskar

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    One of my favourite slokas from Srimad Bhagavatam:

    barhāpīḍam naṭa-vara-vapuḥ karṇayoḥ karṇikāraḿ
    bibhrad vāsaḥ kanaka-kapiśaḿ vaijayantīḿ ca mālām
    randhrān veṇor adhara-sudhayāpūrayan gopa-vṛndair
    vṛndāraṇyaḿ sva-pada-ramaṇaḿ prāviśad gīta-kīrtiḥ

    Wearing a peacock feather on his head, a blue forest flower behind his ear,
    Dressed in golden yellow, wearing a garland of wildflowers,
    filling the holes of his flute with the nectar of his lips
    Krishna, revelling in his own Self,
    entered the Vrindavan forest with the cowherd boys who sang his glories.
     
  11. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I really enjoyed that, thank you for sharing your time and energy with us householders.
     
  12. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    More like embellished, never outdone.
    Almost had kitty Cypher helping me post! LOL
     
  13. Bhaskar

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    Sylvan, you are most welcome! My love to cypher also.
     
  14. Firebelle

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    Hmmm...this was the first poem of yours that didn't enthrall me as such...I think you have written much better. Still, I can't talk...I have had writer's block for so long now I would almost conisder it a friend *grimaces* HELP! X
     
  15. Bhaskar

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    Hannah,
    I think your reason for disliking the poem is based on a cultural difference. The baby in question is Sri Krishna, whose leela of stealing butter is symbolic of taking away all our worldly cravings and leaving his footprints in the heart.
     
  16. Firebelle

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    I have to admit, your inspiration for the poem is just that...inspirational! And my lack of knowledge and comprehension surrounding religion is, indeed, great...I am the fiercest atheist I know, but that does not excuse me. I hold immense respect for your culture and religion, Bhaskar...always have done...you are one of the wisest and gentlest people I have had the good fortune of meeting (albeit virtually). So please do not feel offended that I do not like this poem...I just didn't like the words you used :( Ignorant fool that I am! XxX
     
  17. Bhaskar

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    If I felt offended everytime someone disliked something I wrote, mine would be a very sad life.
     
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