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"Sorry That I Loved You"

Not wanting to, not meaning to
I fell hopelessly in love with you.

Was it your face? Was it your smile?
Or that certain sparkle in your eyes?
Was it your sweetness? Was it your voice?
Or the way you make me laugh?

Hoping you'd feel, hoping you'd see
How much you really mean to me

You are my friend, my anchor
The reason I feel so alive
You are in my thoughts, in my dreams
The name that I hear whispering in my ear

I don't think I can, I don't think I want to,
Ever say goodbye to you.

My heart hurts, a constant ache
Arms that are empty of your embrace
You say you care, you said I'm special
But still I'm just a friend and all I'll ever be

What am I suppose to say?
What am I supposed to do?
I never meant to fall in love with a friend like you...

"I'm sorry, coz I am in love with you..."

BrownTripleQQ

 

"It Was Quiet"

It was quiet
Silent shhhs of blank nothings
Just days rising and nights falling
Until you opened a door

It was quiet
And a creak squeaked in
Slowly, surely a little creak at first
That only let me peek
At you

It was quiet
And you demanded a spot
To hold captivated attention and
Move my emotions
Toward you

It was quiet
And you stomped in, shouting to the world
For me to acknowledge your presence
“Give me a chance” you commanded, passionately
Love can live again

I changed my quiet
To let you come in and give a chance
to all you promised
And swiftly you moved in…and out
Until once again
It was quiet

BrownTripleQQ

 

im in the top poets bullshit let me know when

you really throw it up!!!!

 

You have a wonderful mind, indeed!!

 

A sense of humor, I like that!!!

 

"Queen"

I'm a Queen that has
Her own thing
Don't need anyone
Or anything
(Want is a totally different thing)
But a few select true beings
Of family and friends
If you don't like it
Get your own scene

I like to preen and
Wear colors like red
Black, blue, and green
I also like the flavor
Of mangoes, apples
And peaches, and you
Know I'm known to be
Just that sweet

I have evolved from
Being a wallflower
To a wonderful and
Beautiful rose in bloom
See me as I step into the room

Hey you, I would like to meet you
Get up on your feet
And greet me
Like the King that you are
And show me your gifts and feasts

Now don't disrespect me
For I have your
Mother, grandmother, sister
Aunt and nieces within me
I am one of the millions of
Women that carries our charm
Grace and your race
I am the bearer of the
Old and the new
If not for me, you would
Not be a Father, Grandfather
Brother, or a nephew....


BrownTripleQQ

 

Thanks, It's an old piece.

 

enlighten me, she screams at the night
hoping she'll burst into flames
from the stars glowing light
maybe at this second in time
billions of lovers
will be gazing upward too,
and maybe,
a burst of passion
could cure this lonely girls blues
she clenches her fists
hoping her existence
will drift off...
conquering gravity's resistance
she grumbles, what a pathetic place
tears stream, down her delicate face
wishing to explode
into another beaming ray of light
to get her through
yet another hopeless night.

*just how i feel nothing special

 

THANK-YOU​

just let me know when​

everyone is ready to ​

throw there shit up!!​

 

The Concert

The hat, lady tiebrace
above my thyroid smile,
Convinced that palms of silver pay,
my penance for a while.

My dutiful Cor Anglais finds a fault within the primate hoots,
that once were a blissfilled bubble of fruity notes.
ANd a fortunate fly passed by my brow,
which hummed to me
a productive sigh.

Wisty mercy,
complete the piece.
But don't remember to forget the dire,
straight beats of velocity.

The groaning Baton taps over gentle cracks,
but no turning back will ever change the menace
nor the flat tuning.

 

we were legendary
in entwined positions,
in warm, fluttering candle light,
expressing pleasure
as a primal
dreamed momentum
our entirety echoed
faster and faster,
in parallel increments
until mutual explosion.

writhing
on the bed,
passionately
expelled promises to
scream,
increasing, liberating
soul fire bombs,
a friction overload
in parallel increments
until mutual explosion.

we were legendary, writing
in entwined positions, on the bed,
in warm, fluttering candle light, passionately
expressing pleasure expelled promises to
a primal scream,
a dreamed momentum increasing, liberating.
our entirety echoed soul fire bombs,
faster and faster, a friction overload
in parallel increments until mutual explosion.

 

"In The Club"

I'm in the club
and I'm ready
for a glass of bub
to sip
before I get ready
to do my dip
that gets
me so free when I
jump on the dance
floor, hot and just a
little sweaty
I wait and see
who is brave enough
to approach me
if not, after 30 min.
can't wait on any
man who is
intimidated
by a woman like me
or choose to gauge
my sexy
standing against the wall
like it's breaking their fall
When they really want to
feel like they can ball
shot call
when in actuality
most came in the
same car
wanna holler your
name from afar
hold on, hey, what's
your name?
it's definitely not hey,
hey, it's for horses
or course
you get an attitude
because I won't be free
and put you in the mood
Okay, that's not your intention?
Okay then, cool
Let's do this thing
But If you want to
grandstand
until you are ready,
for this jelly
while I'm getting down
to the DJ's freestyle
Please don't
sneak up behind me
to try to cop free feels
like I'm a cheap thrill
because half the women
up in here will
Uh, no hold on,
I didn't come here to
meet, I came here
to dance myself off my feet
If you want a good dance for the night
you need to conduct yourself
just right,
you can dance to the
front, the side, and even
behind me,
but don't grind on me
matter of fact, don't touch
unless it's my hand
to guide me
around the sound
of that music, helping
me to get down
My, my, my
Aren't we fly
as heck
2night,
Goodnight.....


BrownTripleQQ

 

"Promised Not To B Mine"

U keep on Bullshittin
And I keep forgettin

I'm not the one for
Hittin and splittin
But u keep on lickin
My clock's tickin
And I can't understand why
My mind won't rewind
To the time
U promised not to be mine
But the sex is to kind
When I got to unwind
You make me want to find
A love to call mine
But when I drop a new cat, a line
U creep up from behind
Lock me down, and intwine
My feelings, body, and mind
A lusty soul tie that binds

Laced in the promise of no security
U run in the race of promiscuity
I keep plucking up the reality
When I want to stay true to thee
Commitment won't be the truth for me
Is it really that absured for you to see
It falls into a hyprocrisy

Cuz how can u last that long all night
And not last that long in my life


BrownTripleQQ

 

"Sex Casualty"

As he stirred my sex
My mind left neglected
Shaken from my day dream
Where I feel most protected
He wanted to go a second round
And love me physically
Pull me close
And slide inside of me
He knows nothing of me
I do not exist beyond my sex
He doesn't know my birthday
But surely he knows he will never be called my ex
I am nothing once I leave this room
No face, no mind or heart ripped at the seams
He’s not even sure he knows my last name
But he knows what is sure to make me scream
Because what we share
Is not love but pure lust
Diminishing the thought of jealousy
And overlooking the lack of trust
It was once mutual feelings
In this casual sex affair
No need for titles
No reason to care
But things are changing
I now yearn for affection
That grows beyond sex
To the point of mental stimulation
So from here on out
I am done living anonymously
Neglecting my feelings for love
And replacing them with my body
I am a woman reborn
Into a life where trust
Is stemmed from respect
And where love is a must


BrownTripleQQ

 

"the Journey"

my head is so clear

of any negative vibe

this journey is severe

with feelings I can't describe

thoughts I try to gather

but its hard to close the case

sometimes I would rather

leave it open and embrace

the thoughts that can just soothe and

make me feel great

An intellectual groove

To dismantle all the hate

But I'm trapped in the sand

and I see this mirage

its grabs my hand

and makes a collage

of everything that ever mattered

in my life, and those I love
in the distance, horizon shattered

and I look to the sky up above

And when I doubt myself I look into the sky

Stars, and constellations helped me get by

A dream that never seemed to end

A journey I would like to take again

someone once said

everything deserves a try

and it got inside my head

I thought of it as a lie

but then i felt close minded

for things I didn't do

gazed into the sun, blinded

by a meaning to stay true

I ventured through reality

and everything I saw

changed my mentality

and I had to withdraw

from things I didn't comprehend

I thought I never could

see colors condescend

but I knew that I would

understand in the hindsight

of a journey taken too far

with events i can't recite

from a trip that was bizarre

 

Lozi's poem is the only good one from here, the rest are such shit that it hurt my brain to read this idioticy.

 

Tree Swing Meditation

Circular motion autumn
Come and meet the trees
They’re reaching out to hold you
And bring you home again

In solitude we find promise
In silence, our souls
The natural spectrum of beauty
Can never fully be told
The sweet smell of nature
That forever smells like home
Makes us what we are,
Instead of what we’re told

And for this quiet moment.
Where all the world seems right
I quietly say thank you
Before the fast approach of noise and darkness:
The tiring material night

 

bravesirrubin, 'the rest are such shit that it hurt my brain to read this idioticy'? noooooooooooo!. keep an open mind. let the words fall around your brain hemispheres man. if you're finding some poems too weighty read them like 4 lines at a time.

be happy? *passes some incense to rubin*

 

oh right, ko mike. the incense was innocent incense btw. nout dodgy. i'm anti drugs, me. I just find that the incense makes me happy and floaty. smells are fun.