sweet oblivion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kjhippielove88, Jan 8, 2005.

  1. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    i wrote this one an hour ago..

    swallowed by the sea
    lost in my lover's heart
    he took these young hands
    and led me into Sweet Oblivion

    Watched over by dancers in the sky
    Held in Love's grip
    i followed down paths of his soul
    and he led me into Sweet Oblivion

    Tangled in Vines of his Spirit
    Shadowed by his Light
    he Inhaled every bit of me
    and led me into Sweet Oblivion

    Sweet oblivion, Oblivion sweet
    our love rests in the eye of the tornado
     
  2. BlackGuardXIII

    BlackGuardXIII fera festiva

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  3. puddin

    puddin Banned

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    You should be proud, thats an awesome poem.And those pictures are purdy.
     
  4. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    thanks puddin and those pictures are beautiful ken
     
  5. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    i love this stanza, kj...

    especially the 'inhaled every bit of me' part...

    ahhh...

    very very nice.

    makes me wanna roll one :)
     
  6. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    thanks for the feedback
     

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