surrender

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Fierce_Flawless, May 20, 2004.

  1. Fierce_Flawless

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    there are no guarantees / my favorite stranger / somewhere along the line / your mystery faded / replaced with the brightest anger / how i hoped you would return / how you begged me to retreat / for under every golden triumph / there lies a dim defeat / still / i am captivated / your ferocity, underminded / as is the feral frailty behind it / the promises broken / before the sentence was complete / beneath ever glistening triumph / there lies a dim defeat
     
  2. this is amazing to read
    to feel such acceptance for life
    such openness to situations changing even ending.
    that effect our hearts and minds.

    thank you for this post.

    love n peace
    keep posting
    from saff.
     
  3. I enjoyed reading this as well, thank you.
     

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