Surrealistic Longing

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Razor Face, Jul 29, 2004.

  1. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Surrealistic Longing

    Wish myself to death
    immersed under cold waters,
    sinking with the loved's desire
    for a tangible hope.
    Reason and warm bodies above,
    agape at the intransient solitude,
    staring back perplexed.
    Why should cause seperate us?
    Time and space so subjective as well,
    why should we know, and not touch?
    I'd shriek to the heavens but sound
    requires air. Call to you, but you wouldn't hear.
    You silent Gods.
    Death opens ears but then too late
    We, so many strangers, aware, still wait.
     
  2. fizzy_elf

    fizzy_elf Member

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    damn. that make me sit back and wake up. eye opening. vivid. breathtaking really.
     
  3. vixencandy

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    that really kicks ass, its spiffy.
     

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