Please lift the veil of this day for me I wish to see the sun feel warmth upon my face as I wash my hands in a cold ocean ravens laugh through the walls of the house as I sit steeping tea deepening the meaning of my sadness with the madness of laughter Music is my only hope so I listen to the same song Written words, falling water stones become priceless scattered through out the world like hearts in our chests Trying to entice motion a sentiment of emotion Blessings Standingdeer
i really like this part... madness, craziness, depression, you give some great imagery these two lines are just a bit awkward to me.. the similarity of the words motion and emotion are difficult for me to read
