Summer fruits

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Danfree, Aug 29, 2007.

  1. Danfree

    Danfree Member

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    In this lonely summer

    Loves were hanging on trees

    People picked them up

    Brought them to their houses

    Peeled the skin of their suffering

    By the nails of their soft hands

    Sometimes they cut them with their immature knives

    Warm in room temperature

    Hot in their ovens

    Or keeping them expecting whisperings

    In the night chillness of their refrigerators

    Man to a woman to a man

    Hungry for moans

    Stubs their tooth

    In the morning of their sweet flesh.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    this is really nice. the first time i read it, it kind of confused me but by the third time i got it and it spoke to me.
     
  3. Danfree

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    Thank you "Blackheartbitch" (What a strange name!...)
     
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