tell the world off in one stutter, amazing, the art of deception. take one word and stretch it out, the problems of communication. take as long as you want to get your point across. maybe people will listen harder, write a story to fill a page fill the air with stutters. -danei
i thought it was alright. i liked the last line, 'fill the air with stutters,' it brought the whole poem together for me =)
Kinda choppy, but I get the feeling it's intentional, so it's alright. I agree, the last line really closes it well. I like what you're saying there.