Stripped

Discussion in 'Remember When?' started by Quality, May 13, 2007.

  1. Quality

    Quality Banned

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    asking auntie if i could go out front
    to race my cousins popsicle stick boat
    Scotty, i shaved mine on the cement
    you will never beat me.
    Okay, but if it starts raining, come back inside
    the rain poured down harder than ever
    our boats seemed to drift quicker
    quicker, quicker, toward the sewer.
    we ran side by side watching our creations
    bare feet splashing during the storm
    along the curb was our boats
    not a care in the world.
     
  2. themnax

    themnax Senior Member

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    now THAT's 'poetry'!

    =^^=
    .../\...
     
  3. i_need_a_miracle

    i_need_a_miracle Venusian Goddess

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    Thought it was wonderful. Good poetry.
     
  4. Wormed

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    Uber delightful.
     

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