stone grey bird

in a tree on a branch
he doth sit
a stone grey bird
in an hour on a minute
by tired wings he doth
rest
this stone grey bird
in a day on a night
he doth say this stone grey bird
will fly away

 

i really like this one

the repetition of doth makes sence and even though the placement is different it works!

simple yet elegant

 

thanks lauren
i was trying to make it sound like an e.a. poe
poem
itss about a pigeon that i saw sitting in a tree

 

i like this
it's short but it's the meaning across