still early on a saturday night

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Major Peacenik, Apr 7, 2006.

  1. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    still early on a saturday night

    I'm turning all the lights on in empty rooms,
    defense against the elements
    I'm dog-tired from Greenville,
    and I hope you'll be home soon

    This is the song of lonliness in joy
    I've been awake for hours today
    threat of the reckoning will keep me on my toes,
    and so help me, I'll never sleep again

    This is the song of emptiness in joy
    I've been awake for hours today
    I'm dog-tired from Greenville,
    and so help me, I'll never sleep again
     
  2. x_WaX_x

    x_WaX_x Member

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    i love this...
     
  3. Benjiman

    Benjiman Member

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    :) its nice, sad though hehe, but thats always a good thing
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    wow, excellent work, MP. :)
     
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