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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jim kirby, Jul 17, 2007.

  1. jim kirby

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  2. floydianslip6

    floydianslip6 Senior Member

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    I really like this piece, but I wish some of the rhymes were a little more complex. I especially like the "do they look at us and weep".
     
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