Song I wrote for a rock star

Discussion in 'Hippies' started by WoodstockChild, Jun 2, 2006.

  1. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

    First off, It was written for a rock star, but I can't say which one. If you can guess, then that's cool bt it's slightly personal. He's very famous anyway.

    Once again
    The reflection in the mirror lets you down
    Lets you down, lets you down
    Once again
    The world that you live in puts you down
    Puts you down, puts you down.
    Did they seal your heart
    Without a reason why?
    Did they still your soul
    Leave you crucified and stoned
    You're not alone.
    Once again
    You feel that you've been cheated by this game
    By this game called life
    Once again
    You've been misunderstood and now you see
    What no one else can see
    Did they seal your heart
    Without a reason why?
    Did they still your soul
    Let your spirit die without a home
    You're not alone.
    Child without a name
    I know you're not the one to blame
    You're spirit bears no shame.
    I can see into your eyes
    And, baby, I don't see no lies
    Only desperate cries.
    Did they seal your heart
    Without a reason why?
    Did they still your soul
    Trade your life for lies
    When there's nowhere to go
    You're not alone.
    When there's no one to hold
    Yo're not alone.
    I've been there before
    You're not alone.

    -Rani Lee Taylor. future rock star
     
  2. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

  3. DevilSaNgel

    DevilSaNgel Member

    peace man
     
  4. trekker

    trekker Intrepid Traveler

    Thank you for sharing that. Yeah, people do steal hearts, you have to be careful.
     
  5. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

  6. hemp726

    hemp726 Member

    do u want us to guess?
     
  7. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

    Hmmmmmm... if you wish... I'm not sure if I want people to know...
     
  8. Politics are awesome

    Politics are awesome Politics suck

    whatever happened to choruses and verses and etc etc......?
     
  9. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

    Wha? I write my songs the way I want them
     
  10. Politics are awesome

    Politics are awesome Politics suck

    Well, future rockstar, being a rockstar is all about doing what the fans/press/record labels want. Can you name a rocker or band that became famous all over the world by using a freeform piece like the one you wrote? :p
     
  11. jean_genie

    jean_genie psychedelic saturday

    syd barrett did a bit of stuff like that ;P Not much though..
     
  12. Politics are awesome

    Politics are awesome Politics suck

    Syd Barrett wasn't too famous, though... I always coincided "rockstar" with being "incredibly famous."
     
  13. Shambhala Peace

    Shambhala Peace Senior Member

    The song reminds me of Bob Dylan's "Like a Rolling Stone", as in I could set the lyric's to it.
    *shrugs*
    It's a start. Certainly better than anything I could ever come up with. I prefer prose.
     
  14. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

  15. mr.morrison

    mr.morrison Senior Member

    better than any lyrics i could write.
    im not a poet. im better with making the musical parts of songs
     
  16. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

    The dude I wrote it for... well... it wasn't necessarily classic rock, but not modern rock either. Hmmmm
     
  17. Shambhala Peace

    Shambhala Peace Senior Member

    Well, if you are going to leave, could you at least indulge us to who he is? :D
     
  18. Any Color You Like

    Any Color You Like Senior Member

    Is it Freddy Mercury?
     
  19. WoodstockChild

    WoodstockChild Intrepid Traveler!

    Nope. I did write one for him too though. God my heart bleeds for him as well.

    And it was a response to the Wikipedia article on Axl Rose. Wierd I know. It felt right.
     
  20. cerridwen

    cerridwen in stitches

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