Sometimes women kickass...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lady_dreamcatcher, May 26, 2006.

  1. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

    there are some gramatical issue with this that sort of make it difficult to read, but i dig the vibe it sends! it almost sounds... unfinished. like you just stopped writing it before you got to the end. i'd love to read a bit more! and the title seems a bit harsh, just because of the mood the poem sets. overall, however, i enjoyed reading this. keep it up, and i hope to read more!
     
  2. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

    ahhh! so i see! well, silly, tell me that next time! haha thanks for the explanation, man, it really brings this more into focus. blessings~
     
  3. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    i found it easy to read
    but thats prolly cause i read/write spoken work
    its excellent
     
  4. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    no where online :p
    at least not yet
     

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