Something I wrote down while trippin'

I tried to translate the best I could LMAO


Spiral colors all in my mind
theses feelings are of an unknwown kind
Im falling in and dropping out
Theyll never hear my screams and shouts

There she is full of life yet so dead
her song floating round my head
total lose of space and time
If I left now it would be a crime

Softly laid in a field of grass
I inhale I just cant pass
I open my eyes to a great white light
all knowledge there in plain sight

Now I know and so should you

Its mind blowing but o'so true

 

It almost sounds like Syd Barrett. I wonder why?

 

Maybe because its an aa bb rhyme scheme, haha. And in the 60s/70s that's the only rhyme scheme that was popular.

 

Huh? Your comparing that to Syd?






I could die happy

 

:lol:
Haha. I would have to agree there.

 

once a friend wrote a story while high, only in verses like the bible. sober he couldn't understand it. He sent it to me, and I couldn't understand it sober either. then I read it high and it was deeply meaningful.