someone stole my car today

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Digger168, Aug 15, 2005.

  1. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

    Empty,......like a paper sack.
    Crushed before disposal.

    Before,...never feeling the lack
    of attention and care,
    and fairing well.

    But not today.

    Today seems like an endless stream
    of times mercenary,
    and unforgiving tricks.

    It seems to leave nothing said
    but memories and emotions

    stripped bare.

    Trying to assuage my loss,
    and even in that........

    getting lost.
     
  2. stranger

    stranger Member

    no shit?? sometimes the universe sends us soaring into the stars, and sometimes it sends us diving into the dirt... but it does both for a reason, and everything will work out perfectly. peace and healing wishes to you, you seem to really need it.
     
  3. happyhippyflower

    happyhippyflower Sucker Punch

    good it was stolen
    no longer

    will you pollute mother earth

    with your smog producing
    chemicals that defects the birth

    one less person
    on the road too
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    Your car really get stolen? Feel for you, if it did. I’ve been carless quite recently myself… luckily I had a way to get to the bus line and managed to save enough up to get a new engine put in. I’m sure you’ll persevere as well, my friend.
     
  5. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    wow, tough situation. i am not afforded a situation to be without a car so i would absolutely be flipping out.....but one thing i have found.....the universe always provides a way......*wink,wink* i just always flip out first....then i center....havent figured out how to always be the eye of the hurricane yet.
     
  6. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

    "good it was stolen
    no longer

    will you pollute mother earth

    with your smog producing
    chemicals that defects the birth

    one less person
    on the road too"


    Ouch!!!!

    Twist that knife in a little deeper wont you?
    I don't want to own a car
    I revile the fucking things
    But public transport in San Diego
    is a fairly tale.

    Jesus, "happyhippieflower"

    I'm not Exxon frigging Mobile
    Or Arco,...

    I'm just a fragile human being like
    yourself,... just trying to survive in
    a world that worships plastic gods
    and greed, and money.

    God Damn Woman.....

    I AM NOT A NUMBER!
    OR AN OBJECT!!!!!!!!!

    Perhaps you have the luxury of not needing to own a car.

    Or your parents are rich enough to own a hybrid.

    But for GODS SAKE........
    Cut me some friggin slack!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I'm sorry,....
    I apologise for my rampant behavior
    and I thank all those who tendered their sympathy.

    Perhaps this is a new opportunity to find work near by
    where I live, and I could bike there.

    See,.... the clouds of damnation have parted already.

    I can see the sunshine

    Through the smog.......

    A little........

    :)
     

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