some (sort of) haiku

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by celtgrrl, Nov 12, 2005.

  1. celtgrrl

    celtgrrl batty woman

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    phosperescent
    yellow green light
    sweet hay
    echo of dreams
     
  2. celtgrrl

    celtgrrl batty woman

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    depression
    silent hyena
    iron heavy
     
  3. celtgrrl

    celtgrrl batty woman

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    the lions released
    come rushing roaring tearing
    slashing to the bone
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I like them. Especially the second one, nice one with the "silent hyena" :)
     
  5. celtgrrl

    celtgrrl batty woman

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    thank you. me being bipolar tends to come out in my writing/painting
     
  6. SillyGreenMeep

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    i hear that. Things seem to be balancing out more or less these days though.
     
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