Smile

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The Instinct, Jul 12, 2007.

  1. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    I realized my poems have changed the older I get so I figured I can share one of another time. A poem that should make you smile somewhere inside at some point. Again, all thoughts/comments are welcome, replies are greatful.


    I am about to take you on a journey,
    A nice relaxing, peaceful happinesss, a Zen feeling.
    There are nice blue skies, sunshine, and warm weather
    Your mind flies over open water as dolphins jump below
    The water is crystal blue and waves crash along the seashore
    Beaches of white sand travel as far as the eyes can see
    Once you thought this was paradise, but were happily mistaken
    Your on the port side of a cruise ship watching as you dock
    As you exit the ship you hear soothing sounds of pure reggae
    You come upon the beach and are about to embark on a snorkeling journey
    Swimming through blue waters your eyes open up to a new world
    The most beautiful tropical fish swim around without fear
    All you hear is your breathing and the sound of the ocean
    You head back to shore and lay out beneath the sun
    Taking in some of the warmth of sun rays that have been given
    Taking away all the worries you've once had
    Your nice and calm now, ready to take on your next adventure
    You head back to ship allowing the breeze to hit your face
    Smelling the sea air wanting the time to never end
    So it doesn't, you take in a few shows for laughs and drinks
    It dawns upon midnight and hit the midnight buffet
    You become sleepy and head back to your cabin
    As your about to change you notice your p.j.'s are lying on your bed
    They are formed into a little man with sunglasses on his head
    You put them on and crawl into bed, nice and relaxed
    As your about to fall asleep you smile because tomorrow is just the same

    c. 2000
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    sounds like a cruise...thats amazing ive never been on a cruise and this makes me want to go on one
     
  3. Autentique

    Autentique wonderfabulastic

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    pure reggae makes me smile.

    :)
     
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