Slipping

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mr_alleycat, Aug 19, 2007.

  1. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    Walking a rope
    Above pools of regret
    Patchwork scabs
    Lends proof of missteps

    Festering sores
    Seep through my eyes
    Threaten a tempest
    From memory's ride

    A day that was bright
    Now lost in the dark
    Echoes the pain
    With stifling loss

    Nets of tissue
    Wearing quite thin
    Strength's projection
    Slipping again

    Lurking in shadows
    Under the haze
    A spirit of sorrow
    Mirrors the brave

    mr_alleycat
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Had to read it a few times...but I liked it. :)
     
  3. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    I really like this poem. Another great write from the alleycat.

    Peace.
     
  4. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Mr Alleycat strikes again, with uncommon uses for metaphores.
    I enjoyed this, as I enjoy most of your poems.
     

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