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There it was like a cold witner day ​

no horse no sleigh no children at play​

haunched on his perch stalking his prey​

but stop the wind wishes to talk and not go through the anguising stalk​

i heard a voice i heard i heard a cry i thought to myself this must be a lie​

i stop i pace my heart starts to race no not here i wish i was there​

but what am i hiding from am i the consumption of fear​

and there i am on a cold winter day lonesome and lonely like an animal of prey​

i look for a path​

its gone​

I search and search​

I stop and wait and anticipate​

wait and wait...........​

 

Punctuation! I had to reread to make sense of some of the lines. For example:
[but stop(,) the wind wishes to talk and not go through the anguising stalk]
[but what am I hiding from? Am I the consumption of fear?]
And why do you capitalize the first line and then leave the rest of the poem looking like one long rambling sentence?

[ heard a voice i heard i heard a cry i thought to myself this must be a lie
i stop i pace my heart starts to race ]

Rhyme here is too forced, it's distracting. Tis a pity though, I adore the theme, you can do so much with -winter days- but I'm afraid you try to tackle too much at once without really knowing where to channel your stream of conscience.