Simple but sweet.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by melinda_erin, Apr 3, 2007.

  1. melinda_erin

    melinda_erin Member

    The sun is warm a shadow casts
    Of us two standing I wish this could last
    Deeper than the ocean higher than the sky
    I want the whole entire world to know I love this guy.

    ...what do you think? i wrote it a few days ago about my boyfriend. i was going to add more to it but i couldn't think of how to go should i add onto it? i want something different...

  2. I really do like it. You're right, it is simple, but it's sweet :)
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

    Very nice, thank you.
  4. amourcathy

    amourcathy Member

    very sweet lovely poet

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