short ceative writing. ~UnJah~

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  1. quietthinker

    quietthinker Member

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    maybe it didnt belong in poetry? any thoughts? id totally appreciate input, my styles gone in a newer direction.. i chose this one to go with to represent it.. comin along second nature..

    ~UJ, groovy annihilation~
    ungod: the moment where ego fixates on the endoftimes. the declaration of self: a worthless image reflecting light, housing parasites, examining the unexplained, and giving purpose without logical reasoning- illusive magnitude of desperation endowed by assumption and the retaining trait to morph possibility into a determinedstate. actual processes of this moment decline FURTHUR analyzation, infinite gratitude conjoined by an allpowerfulpresencethatpermitsbeauty that lingers between modes of perfectimperfection: a waxandwan: a bond entitled to the most courageous of beings to build a relationship considered bestrepresentatedbysunandmoon. fearlfulheadcase implores dire solitude so it may relate perceivedexperience to agivenself and outragouesly claim to justify deepermeans: saluting myself to be a twin of tragedy and it's reign of misfortune, terror, and unrighteousness that follows- as if to be forsaken. egodeath or peaceout because this is lamesauce. dont lick the wound which needs no further cleaning

    ~would love to hear what people think. sorry for the misspelling. all things joined together were intentional. thanks for reading. :grouphug:
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    too many ideas and clutter all going on at the same time...over loaded. Did not enjoy.
     

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