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She Came

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Nathan11, Jun 12, 2004.

  1. Nathan11

    Nathan11 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    She came from afar
    To see his beautiful face
    They are now over par


    I had to write this for my english class, I like it, I left it open ended so it can mean to you, what you want it to mean.
     
    Nathan11, Jun 12, 2004
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  3. Bro_Rific

    Bro_Rific Banned

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    Are they golfing? WTF
     
    Bro_Rific, Jun 12, 2004
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  5. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    LOL, I didn't quite understand the ending either, but it has potential. You should work on it some more, turn it into a masterpiece!! (Not that it isn't one already........) Peace.
     
    Moonjava, Jun 13, 2004
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