Shadows

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Littlwing70, Jul 6, 2007.

  1. Littlwing70

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    Shadows

    Love isn’t something you can grab
    With your hand, you understand
    Friends aren’t something that come and go
    Fast or slow, not the way it goes

    When you feel down you’ve got to look around
    Travel across the ground from here to there
    Sit in someone else’s chair, slip on their shoes
    Once you see truth, happiness is easy


    Too much time staring at your shadow
    Just lift your head and move ahead
    You can’t see the sun shining down
    If you don’t look up, look around


    It follows you around
    Dragging you down
    Making you feel foolish
    Everyone has a shadow


    I have seen the shadow you cast
    Feels like your past, doesn’t last,
    It’s no different than the rest of ours
    And it’s no uglier than the best of ours

    With the things you have underestimated
    Your life has been made too complicated
    Your love underrated, unreciprocated
    Scars not revealed, always concealed


    But the darkness won’t hide
    What you don’t want them to see
    It’s all a matter of the rising tide
    Ebb and flow, what will be will be





    This is actually written more like lyrics but I meant it as a poem. Who knows, maybe I will put some music to it someday.
     
  2. AlawlessLulu69420

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    yu SHOULD write music t it, make it a type of bluesy music, its really good :)
     
  3. Littlwing70

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    Thanks, did you read my other poem my one about a single father?
     
  4. RexLee

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    another great poem my friend
     
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