Seperated from the Light

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by yyyesiam2, Aug 5, 2007.

  1. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    I rarely remember that I am alive.....
    Most often at times that it's tough to survive.
    Though when I do, it feels so right,
    Me and the world are light-so bright, so bright.

    Then I try to grasp the rays,
    And slip into the passage of days,
    The unending path, the search.
    A world of division, a dark gloomy church.

    And as I forget the light,
    I see it in another.
    Shocking kindness and beauty wake me,
    And now there is no other.

    I am alive and life is all there is....
    Love fills me and it brings so much pain,
    A pain I don't want to let go,
    But it slips away and I am sane....again.

    Separated from the light.
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Good poem! :)
     
  3. Chess Hotel

    Chess Hotel Member

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    I love the first paragraph the most :)
     
  4. children of korn

    children of korn Member

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    its a fantastic poem
     
  5. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    I can relate
     
  6. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    Awesome peom. i like the second and third paragraphs the best
     
  7. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    thanks everyone. i wrote this at 4:30 in the morning, and i wasn't sure how clear it came out. i'm glad it was understood.
     
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