Discussion in 'Poetry' started by **pinchy**, Jan 20, 2005.

  1. **pinchy**

    **pinchy** Member

    Whispers iIt's like I'm in a cube

    I'm already fucked, my

    life screwed.

    Should I end it or mend it?

    O D on glass may it fast

    or fight with all my might and

    stay in sight.

    Would it be pleasant to end

    my existents ?

    Would they giggle to see my

    eyes rolled back?

    FUCK that

    I'm a gaze in your eyes make

    you surprise .

    Make you think of death

    and all that fucked up mess.

    I'm a live the best and put

    your life to the test.
  2. **pinchy**

    **pinchy** Member

    This Is My First Post On Hip Forums Hope You Like.
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

    I'm not a fan of rap or hiphop but if that's the audience you're writing for I think you're doing mighty fine!

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