Seeking Clairvoyance

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Random_Zephyr, Jan 2, 2012.

  1. Random_Zephyr

    Random_Zephyr Lifer

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    Seeking Clairvoyance

    Is it you, myself,
    or us I've lost faith in?
    How can I trust my own judgement,
    When I know nothing?

    Is your aim to uproot,
    To transform?
    Is that what defines commitment,
    Is that what I need?
    Perhaps,
    Could you tell me what I'll want?

    That routine,
    Restless feeling is coming fast,
    I'm fighting it.
    Everything in me is fighting,
    You have my word.

    I'll push and push until I'm free,
    But for once,
    this time, no one is pulling me.
    I'm doubting they ever were...

    The proverbial grass,
    Is it greener?
    If my mind wasn't in a state of flux,
    Maybe I'd know by now

    They seem so Goddamn happy,
    The lonely ones.
    My heart begs,
    Begs to question all it's known.

    Love and youth
    It's bittersweet,
    When you find yourself with no time,
    no time to make mistakes,
    No time to waste

    All wants for the future,
    Held in my arms.
    Why can't I escape sorrow?
    This mourning,
    for a life long lost

    Surely our thoughts are often one,
    If only I had the proof

    My fears,
    projected on you.
    Transparency has never been
    Your strong suit

    You gave me a taste,
    Sweet freedom
    You gave me an inch,
    I try not to take more

    We both know
    You won't be surprised,
    To find I'm half way there

    If you'd asked of me
    What I've asked of you,
    I'd fear every moment
    Waiting for your inevitable detach


    ( I'd appreciate constructive criticism. First thing I've ever written that wasn't an assignment. )
     
  2. WOLF ANGEL

    WOLF ANGEL Senior Member - A Fool on the Hill Lifetime Supporter

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    Expression is the understanding and construction of thoughts into comprehensive text -no clairvoyance needed here :)
     
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